@Stormwriter I meant that she in a Mary Sue in the sense that no matter what she does people still love her.
I do agree with you on all your other points, though. They were very insightful 😊
I don't like the carelessness the MC has shown over the last couple chapters. She endangering everyone and coming off as a Mary Sue character.
On the other hand that last page that said, "Do it for her." Hit me right in the childhood.