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The premise has potential, but I think there could've been a clearer way of showing how Makoto's mom "gives up" on the loop. Is there a set time the day repeats (I'm guessing 12AM on the dot)? I can infer that Makoto's mom happened to be awake in the kitchen at the start of the loop (so she'd always find herself back in the kitchen as the new loop begins). Perhaps a digital clock should be shown to mark key points in the loop?
 
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mc stronk, otherwise interesting groundhog's day premise. I guess we will see in later chapter if the day restarts for everyone that who died during the day and are still living or if only the living go through the loop. Keep up the work and thank you for having the courage to share this with us.
 
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Nice artstyle, pacing is weird but works, accentuate events, her mother died and shes kinda cold, add more emphasis on her reaction, its too unrealistic, but well its my just my opinion and i read baki so i dont count, keep up the good work, im in love.
 

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