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i liked the artwork! square hands, blocky characters, kinda like Genndy Tartakovsky's powerpuff girls - good contrast with black and white use

thought the action sequences were a bit convoluted, and the writing was pretty fast paced but kinda all over the shop, could benefit from a few rewrites/more editing

anyways, good work
 

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