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It's an old trope but this manga feels like a particularly lazy take on it as well...

Yes it jumps around a lot. I can follow it mainly because I've already read the same basic story dozens of times. But even then this 'heroine' seems particularly stupid. Where does she get her faith that things will proceed exactly as they did in the game when a ton of stuff has already changed?
 
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Thanks for the translation ❤️
I'm glad she saved her mother and pretty much already stopped the "heroine" from getting her cousin plus her half-sisters personality is terrible anyways you'd have to be blind to like her after saying weird things like "she's going to die" and threatening her grandfather's power against people.
 
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That blonde idiot is on the same level as "the heroine" from- I'm Not a Villainess!! Just Because I Can Control Darkness Doesn't Mean I'm a Bad Person!
Dumb, open about her intention, acting like a dumb child, treating the world like an easy game.

Her defeat will be swift, the cousin does not even like from the beginning and bad-mouthing the mc put her in the negative.

Edit- The translation quality was readable, the real problem were the pacing.
This entire chapter could have been dealing with the father, second chapter on her cousin but decided to fuse it.

Very bad, but I guess we are not to take this seriously anyone with a dumb antagonist like that.
 
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OK, that was hard to follow, and not because of the translation.
The pacing of this thing is all over the place. They should have started at high school and explained the rest through flash backs as needed, not dump the entire thing right off the bat.
 
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eh eh eh
this
zoomed right past everything in the novel (thats been translated so far)
 
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Thank you for the translation!!! 😭😭😭❤
I didn't realize the pacing was this fast FAST lol
 
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Holy shit the pacing damn fast hahahaha they just stormed through her effort to get her uncle to rescue her mom and whatnot lol
 
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I’m calling it - Male lead and 2nd heroine are in love with the villainess but the male lead will win obviously because it’s not yuri sadly...
 
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The translation is fine but isn't the pacing of the events just.... A little too quick????
 
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I think I read a novel about this few years back, let me find it.

found it: https://www.novelupdates.com/series/omae-mitai-na-hiroin-ga-ite-tamaruka/

It's still updating, I guess this is a promotional manga for the novel?
 
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GAAAAAAAAAAAAAA They flattened the first four chapters of the novel, the best part of the story in my opinion, into fourteen pages?? Should have been two or three full chapters. Give me back my heroic chibi Tsubaki-chan!

@empressnyannyanau the web novel in Japanese is complete (at 180 chapters). It's the translation that's coming out slowly and still updating.
 
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I don't know but i have this feeling that Kyousuke will fall in love with the other heroine, heroine will fall in love with Mc, then maybe a new character/ capture target appears then make Mc fall in love. Yeah. kind of cliche...BUT I LIKE IT
 

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