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Holy shit that was way better than I expected. Read out of impulse from the new arrivals and god dam never read a brand new oneshot as good as this one.
 
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I knew that this was not going to end well.
I knew it since the start.
And yet, I hoped for a good ending, a happy one.



... god damn it.
 
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I know that was supposed to be intentionally unclear as to what happens, but I'm not sure if what I'm misunderstanding was meant to be misunderstood.

Nike murdered the mother before leaving, but what was that thing on the right side of her head? It looks like the bomb being dropped on the last page, which makes me think it wasn't a nuke but an alien bomb being sent in. In which case we could assume the DNA Nike took was from Ai, and they merged, making it a pseudo-happy end.

Alternatively, the device could have been what was need to extract DNA and it sucked out the mother's brain or something (which would kinda justify the response to the aliens as a whole) and Nike used that to carry out Ai's wish (she might or might not have been alive during and after this). In this case, the ending is notably more depressing as it implies both Nike and Ai(?) were nuked.

Still not sure what's up with the butthole.
 
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this was a total mess, but the worst part was that they never gave entity a some damn pants
 
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@BobTheSkrull actually, it looks like AI murdered the mom. The shadow over the dead mom has short hair like Ai. Though whether Nike and Ai are separate people at that point is also up for interpretation.

Seriously though, why zoom in on the slightly gaping butthole? and is that a vagina on the back? Why.
 
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I can't believe that people pay as patreons to a group that doesn't use a spellchecker lmao

I understand sentences not really landing just right, but basic spelling errors is a big yikes dude
 
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Didn't check a tags, before reading... Well , it was not bad (?) read... Need a few more chapters . I wanna know wtf is she, what happened after...
 

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If roaches can survive a nuke so can a selfregenerating alien.

Though I feel these "aliens" are actually angels.
 

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