Mm, moderately interesting. I like the part where he rendered judgement unto scalpers. What I feel is that it's a bit of a mish-mash of a one shot, like it needed more focusing to make the overall narrative more cohesive. I guess what I mean is, it's like the author is trying to mash multiple disparate elements, and they're not quite mixing as well as you'd hope. I wonder if it could have worked better by changing the afterlife element into something else... something that meshes better with the model kit thing.
Well, at any rate, I think I'd take Dragonborn.