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J jhs_reika Dex-chan lover Joined Dec 9, 2020 Messages 4,165 Jul 21, 2024 #2 I can imagine MC saying something like, "Waste needs to be incinerated." or "Don't eat him, you'll get a stomachache."
I can imagine MC saying something like, "Waste needs to be incinerated." or "Don't eat him, you'll get a stomachache."
NatoBoram Active member Joined Oct 23, 2023 Messages 39 Jul 22, 2024 #3 Every plot device used are too structured. It's got a good premise and it's memorable, which is already a huge win in the trashsekai scene, but the author is an amateur. 6/10. Multi-chapter uploads are amazing, thanks!
Every plot device used are too structured. It's got a good premise and it's memorable, which is already a huge win in the trashsekai scene, but the author is an amateur. 6/10. Multi-chapter uploads are amazing, thanks!
