@YunChi
Just providing my honest feedback based on these assumptions:
I'm assuming u haven't been TLing for long and maybe, this is even your first attempt?
I'll also assume either English or Chinese isn't your first language/ language u r good at,
or u have translated this from some other language, which may/may not be one u r good at
or the above translated source was pretty bad to begin with
1. To be blunt, if this was ur 1st time, pretty good, it felt better than those google translate scripts
but if u have been doing this for a while, then u still kinda suck at it (sorry (>w<) )
2. As
@ilikeanime said, there are grammatical errors and certain issues with the translation, which may
have been due to the above factors or maybe because u just dropped a random ch24 so i kinda feel out
of sync (like i can't remember who the hell is that ass guardian fairy? lol)
3. If ur source was all-proper, then u need to polish whatever language u suck at
4. If u don't suck at either languages then u need to review ur TLed scripts a couple of times, which I think is
the job of a proofreader/quality checker/editor (idk)
5. I have no knowledge of typesetting/redrawing and I honestly don't give a damn about them as long as they're
readable/don't change the original drawings too much
6. I appreciate u having a go at it even though u seem, ummm, inexperienced? I also like that u made it clear that
u aren't sniping the series , the odyssey team is doing pretty well imho (even if they are slow as fuck xP)
7. If u r interested in this continuing with this project, I advise u to help odyssey and learn from them
I believe
@Arcky and gang wouldn't mind personally training a new slave
I apologize if any of what I said offended u, don't pay heed to those overly negative criticisms
I hope this wall of text helped u in some way and wasn't just a waste of time 😅
Good luck! 😊
PS :
I see shit being thrown at u already lol so make sure u wear proper protection
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About being rated, I'd give the TL 5.5/10
Also, unless u are ready to face a shitstorm, u should NOT continue with this project SOLO
Maybe try a new series? or polish ur language skills more and have a go at some series
Lastly, I'm not involved with any scanlation work, I'm just one of those faggot readers who do
nothing but criticize the awesome work done by scanlators so u don't really need to pay heed to my words