5Toubun no Hanayome - Ichika Wants to be Kissed! (Doujinshi) - Oneshot

[MangaDex]

 

[Rengar]

No chappy

 

[Akane02]

AW

 

[Roaster]

Why???
Well, need to wait I guess.

 

[doomskull]

Translation could do with some work.

 

[colossusbird]

I was expecting more but this is okay

 

[Kanami-chan]

ichicute

 

[anatoli]

This is it. This is what I want

 

[STING380]

Noice

 

[SableMan]

@doomskull Thanks for your opinion, chief! I was kinda nervous since this was my first TL on Mangadex and all. May I ask what I need to work with in terms of TL-ing? Like is it lacking in brevity? Like maybe my word choice sounded off? (Unironic comment by the way lol)

 

[doomskull]

@SableMan

Perhaps I should have said that you need a proofreader rather, some spelling and grammatical mistakes here and there.

 

[Hacete]

Short and cute