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[MangaDex]

 

[tonie]

Your english needs more practice, or you're in need of somebody who will check it for you.

 

[Raydnt]

Yikes my brains a bit scrambled

 

[Kalec]

@tonie it feels like half the internet don't know the difference between your and you're

 

[tonie]

Also you can give command to your subordinates (in military I suppose?) and commend somebody for doing a good job.

 

[ichigoteguz]

Readers are about as confused with this translations as are the battle spectators having just witnessed the MC beat rando#1 with a shovel 😄

 

[Tiihokatti]

That was a pretty nasty read. Half of the dialogue was complete gibberish.
Proofreading is very much needed.

 

[tonie]

@ichigoteguz Yea I'm still getting to that part but no worries, I've read the LN (and got a bit tired of this story) but it's always nice to see a manga.

 

[saifors]

That translation was just barely readabl, why would you not translate "shine" to "die" shine in english is a very different word.
As for the actual chapter, I guess Shovel Knight had the right idea all along. I mean even Tanya (Youjo Senki) praised how handy a shovel is in war

 

[ma_ko]

Eh readable at best, thanks for the chapter still

 

[tonie]

@saifors well at war you use shovel as both the weapon and... A shovel that you dig up a hole to hide from those nasty campers :x
Also to dig up your own grave, lolol

 

[blennus]

Shovel? Must be a disciple of Alan the miner from Scoop Musou.
Terrible translation btw.

 

[ClaireC1999]

This isn't by the original translating team so eh.

 

[Necrokora]

why exactly 9.5? its bonafide chap 9 isnt it?

 

[tonie]

@Necrokora I suppose so, just overlook it.

 

[HiraOmnibus]

Probably shoulda just waited for the normal translators, that was some word spaghetti...

 

[blennus]

@Nekrokora yeah it is, but with this level of quality...

 

[freedlelouch]

Guess the translator was just so excited when the next chapter got out that's why they posted it even though the translation pretty confusing. Couldn't blame him though. If only I could read Japanese, I'll just read the original manga. Thanks for this anyways.

 

[Eraviel]

@saifors Actually the one who translated this must be some kind of weeb because it doesn't read as "shine" but "shi-ne" which literally means die in english.

 

[Shiponreza]

Thanks for the feedback. I was just testing how my skills have improved. And sorry for the trouble