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Thanks for the chapter!

Some of the words were kinda hard to read though
 
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Just like Aluna said, the words were kind of hard to read, the font choices for the speech bubbles weren’t horrible but they weren’t good either. I’m assuming you guys are trying to branch off from the usual CC Wild Words and CC AstroCity speech fonts but, at least stroke the text with white so it’ll be easier to see in transparent bubbles. There was also a misspell “god” instead of “good” in the first few pages. Sfx fonts could be better to fit but otherwise, nice.
 
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Wait does that mean that hebcan only travel with 2 people?

Many thanks
 
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Wait... Since when friends...?
They just threatened the fl with debt. 🤔
I don't get the context here.
Did i missed something, or am i misunderstanding the meaning behind the lines.
 
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white haired guy is ONLY person that can use MAGIC?!?!? that literally is a dead giveaway of a special trait that ONLY royalty should/would have, White Hair Guy is the Prince CONFIRMED!!
 
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"Oh, yeah, we jump in and out of windows all the time. Forty, fifty foot drop, that's barely a skip for us Folkus folks."
 

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