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[Kaarme]

@Hamin It's quite interesting the game would place such a high emphasis on RL skills and abilities, when applicable in the game environment. On the other hand it also means you, sort of, get extra skills right off the bat if you happen to have suitable experience in RL. If you don't, tough luck. Though even today a person who has spent years playing various MMOs would naturally fare better in a new game than someone who has never or very rarely played any games of the type. It's not like the games would have nothing in common, plus being fluent with the controls and having faster reactions would offer a good edge.

Other than that, it was super generic, just like the lack of description suggested.

 

[kuzunagi13]

is that aincrad?
wow.. due to his weird skill sets.. his skills triggers differently..
and also why lance/spear? isnt club is a weapon in RPGs too?
and yes.. this is Virtual now.. so your body limitation doesnt apply here.. road to OP.. :3
PS: why you no proof read?

 

[Druidacious]

I’m glad only onii-Chan is a firewood user

 

[neorasp]

>jump
>throw
>bad
oh, really? its another one of those 'obviously good skills turn out to be good to everyone suprise' stories...
i liked the description but i won't waste any more of my time on this kind of manga.

 

[Akabane]

So the sister was like "Onii-san you can't build a harem being a shut-in so I invited you to play a VRMMO where I had already built you one"

 

[dopeboykx]

I actually don't give af thats why I didn't "@" you

 

[KN-XIII]

From what I could compare from the Raw, there's a lot of translation error as well as forgotten punctuation and text that are partially and completely omitted, that's why the flow of the conversation is sometimes strange.
A second translator is needed at least to double check and then have a proofreader.

Here's some of the errors I saw:
-All the "Onii-san" spoken by Haruka (the sister) has to be changed by "Onii-chan".

-Page 1, instead of the second onomatopeia "thud", it was supposed to be the door bell sound.

-Page 4, not just "Me too". Full phrase is something like "I'm coming too?"

-Page 13, I just wonder how come that "Delicious" part passed as it sounds just weird with the context. It's actually "Oisu", I'd say it's like a combination of "Oi" and "Wissu" that sometimes japanese (usually youngsters) used to greet. Just think of Goku's personnal greetings, "Ossu".

-Page 15 last panel, I don't understand everything but Chitose mentioned something erotic which is why Haruka is flustered saying "it's not erotic!" and additionally she said "it's the game's story!"

-Page 19 three last panels go like this.
"Chitose..."
"-san... is okay, right...?"
"Hey you over there, what are you doing being all flirty~?"
"No, I was just asking how we should call each other..."

-Page 26, "Chitose! I'll take the Fighter on! Watch out for the Hunter's attack!"
"Okay, got it!"
"Onii-chan. Don't panic even if your HP is in danger. I'll heal you properly."
"Right!"
"Chitose-san! ...Um... I have nothing in particular to say!"
"Why did you call me out?!"

-Page 29 second panel, "Kirika!! The Hunter is aiming at you!!"

-Page 30, "Her HP hasn't decreased too much. In that case, she should be able to recover immediately... Huh? Kirika, you're paralyzed!"
"No way?!"
"I can't cure status ailment yet! ...I know! Onii-chan!"
(Haruka's inner thought which has been omitted on the 5th panel) *If we can deviate Kirika from being the target... She may be able to recover from the effect of the status ailment..!*
"Use that ability called "War Cry"! Take every enemies' attention on you, Onii-chan!"
"Got it!"

There's more but let's stay at it for now. Better make a v2 and fix the mistranslation first.

 

[Dezaki]

i gave up at page 15. please fix it. i no longer had that tenacity to read MTL

 

[Aichan]

Dropped at chapter 1. This must be a new record for me.

 

[Shamz]

kek im sad that im one of those kids that likes fairy tail and sao... wonder when i will get bored of these kind of manga

 

[Hamin]

@Kaarme Yeh, being super generic is the fate of the majority of these series which will undermine any interesting concept. It's unfortunate but such is the current age of manga.