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[MangaDex]

 

[I_Am]

page 4 it should be; "Appears trash are also allowed to enter Wuji pavilion." to and you, are out of place and seem useless in this structure. another way to fix this is 'trash like you', but that to... it seems like it's a typo. and down at page 13 there's that "do the possible" instead of do what I would put as "do what's possible".

 

[laz117]

@I_Am i think it's google translate or something... i seen lots of broken English so far

 

[gregluck]

The father said "who dare to INTIMATE my son". Should be intimidate.

 

[Solaz]

Is there a reason to hide his powerlevel from his dad?