You know, I was thinking of doing at least the first chapter of this series after hearing about it, but I scrapped the idea because I had other things going on at the time. I'm starting to regret that now...
I mean, come on, "Competence of the Underworld"? "Standby"? Really?! For feck's sake, if you're not gonna use a native English PR, at least check any words you're not sure of in the dictionary. Until you do either of those things, this shite will be completely unreadable.