After reading this chapter... I only have a vague idea of what is going on.
I'll wait until it gets a version 2 translation that is understandable I guess.
That bit on page 15 where it said "something's wrong here, the flow of the conversation is off" made me laugh so hard.... because I was literally thinking the same thing about this entire translation.
Jesus, I can't tell if there are pages missing or if they're badly arranged. Translation wise, I can sorta understand but the flow is so jarring from page to page that makes you feel that there's missing pages.