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[Taerene]

murder fest

 

[Fitzgibbon]

Honestly, I can get behind that.
@AtaruAlves : Thank you for taking on on this translation! I don't know very much Japanese, but google is definitely a great tool to help along the way.

 

[aokita]

so long for a short dick

 

[sdarkpaladin]

Wow... er the translation needs some work.

There are many areas what would not make sense in either English or Japanese (though I have yet to read the raw).

 

[HDMI1]

@Hotgps That's not the original version of the cover, the uploader edited it to look like that, along with adding nipples and such to the other pages.

 

[macarroiz]

"Translator: Google Tradutor"
I did smell that something was off

 

[tigeros]

@ataruAlive Thanks for picking this up. Translation is fine.

 

[mahtan]

Not saying to not use google translation, because it is not really bad, but doing some reading to see if there is something that looks weird and changing it to make it less weird is already amazing!

Thanks for the TL.

 

[GrimGriefer]

the only thing that was killed in this chapter was the English language.

 

[crismofern]

@AtaruAlves on your last update of this version you instead changed it to chapter 16

 

[Wolvenworks]

@AtaruAlves you fucked up. You accidentally cloned ch16 instead of fixing ch15