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[MangaDex]

 

[justforthelulz]

Is this a snipe?

 

[Desertweeb]

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[kojiro481]

Mom truly is something else.

 

[xyzzy]

NTR both in the chapter and in the translations. Huh.

 

[Tertium777]

dis woman... 🤣

 

[DeadKinginHell]

Uzaki's dad should really watch what his own wife's thinking....

 

[serpent]

they really just write themselves.

 

[CosmicWitch]

Some of the sentences don't necessarily feel natural. I'm sure they're translated correctly, but at parts your word choice, ("do not," compared to the more natural, "don't,") reads overly formal.

And yeah, try to work on typesetting a little. It's small bits of polish that just makes for a better release overall.

 

[koikun]

Author stop, as soon as it was revealed she still had a husband the joke went to shit fast

 

[Starlordon]

This "NTR flag" joke was fun and all, but now it's starting to become creepy

 

[Hipo]

Was small Uzaki speaking in Kansai?

 

[Jeiben]

The joke was fun and all, but now that we know the husband shit got tasteless :/

 

[Spy1DD]

Going to reread this when the usual boys get to it, but regardless of translation the misunderstandings show no signs of stopping...

 

[anuanuanu]

mama-san lewd

 

[Grye]

The lusty Uzakian mom

 

[DaddyCathy]

@justforthelulz not particularly, the user just wanted to give the whole process a shot despite being relatively new to Japanese. He knows he's not good at photoshop or typesetting as a whole but gave it a go anyway

@Desertweeb see above 😏

@CosmicWitch yeah he was trying to fix some of those issues, but definitely missed the mark in places. Here's hoping he gets better if he decides to try more/other series

 

[Wintermyth]

The papa should worry more about his wife than his daughter :')

 

[AProunds]

What a thirsty thot

 

[Perim]

@Hipo Yes. Refer to chapter 48