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Good effort translating!

I think you'll probably hit a wall once the subject matter becomes a bit more detailed, like explaining the complex older / fantasy environment with accompanying relationships, given you're using google translate - in stark contrast with this pretty chill and simple first chapter (just a heads up :))
 
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I think this is mash up of some other story that involve train traveling through space that I don't remember the title.
 
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I've seen much much worse translations, good job.

Still doesn't mean I can make sense of most that happened here ^^
 
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Ok on page 1 I can tell you are not use to this, so let me give you advice for the sake of readability.

in whatever program you use, increase the size by 300-400% and do all the typesetting there, then scale it down by 25-33% depending on what you chose, this ends up making text look better and any edits easier to do or hide.
 
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Thank you for the translation !
This looks like alice in wonderland on steroids @~@
 

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