I think I prefer a better and proofread translation than a fast one. This is a mess to read. I'm sure someone else gonna pick this up and do a different translation work. I'm gonna drop this chapter till that comes.
Not much point in this when is barely readable, sorry to the people who translated this, but you really should get a proper proofreader to avoid messes like this one.
Is it English? Dude you need proofreading! There are a lot of mistakes!!
Though, your efforts are appreciated as a newbie, as it's your first chapter you uploaded! Try correcting yourself!