I guess my only issue with this, is that all characters with "white" hair look the same, same for the ones with dark hair, so I can't really distinguish them. Well, it's actually just the dark haired girls aside from the friend's sister.
I hate it when translators decide to switch first and last name precedence. It's well known that Japanese people say last then first name, and most translators do just that, so it really throws in a wrench when suddenly it's the other way around.