A Middle-Aged Man Who Returns From Another World Goes Back to When He Was 17 and Becomes Unbeatable - Ch. 4

[MangaDex]

 

[deezenautz]

Stop censoring the words.

 

[LoliTobrut]

Stop censoring the words.

Like, the unintentional censoring one?
Okay then. But why?

 

[Mister_Susan]

Like, the unintentional censoring one?
Okay then. But why?

Single star censoring like you've doing here doesn't accomplish anything except drawing attention to the word in question – rather than dampening its offensiveness, you're making it more jarring.

Generally you'll want to either rework the dialogue so it doesn't include words you censor, or just include the profanity fully uncensored. Both approaches have their merits and detractors, and the one to use varies with the piece you're working with.

Since this is a seinen manga that seems to be leaning more into the dark-edgy-trashy market, uncensored crass language is probably closer to author intent here.

 

[LoliTobrut]

Single star censoring like you've doing here doesn't accomplish anything except drawing attention to the word in question – rather than dampening its offensiveness, you're making it more jarring.

Generally you'll want to either rework the dialogue so it doesn't include words you censor, or just include the profanity fully uncensored. Both approaches have their merits and detractors, and the one to use varies with the piece you're working with.

Since this is a seinen manga that seems to be leaning more into the dark-edgy-trashy market, uncensored crass language is probably closer to author intent here.

Okay then , i will change it But what should i do with intentionally censored word like "saiyan" should i just censored it like intended?

 

[Aran214]

thank you for the scanlation!
that was fast!

 

[LoliTobrut]

thank you for the scanlation!
that was fast!

You're welcome
Well, somehow i managed

 

[Newbii]

Single star censoring like you've doing here doesn't accomplish anything except drawing attention to the word in question – rather than dampening its offensiveness, you're making it more jarring.

Generally you'll want to either rework the dialogue so it doesn't include words you censor, or just include the profanity fully uncensored. Both approaches have their merits and detractors, and the one to use varies with the piece you're working with.

Since this is a seinen manga that seems to be leaning more into the dark-edgy-trashy market, uncensored crass language is probably closer to author intent here.

If it's about the Saiyan thingy, I'm pretty sure it's intended by the author for copyright reasons. I think the scanlator did a good job as is. Preserves the joke and presentation by the author well.

 

[LoliTobrut]

If it's about the Saiyan thingy, I'm pretty sure it's intended by the author for copyright reasons. I think the scanlator did a good job as is. Preserves the joke and presentation by the author well.

Thank you, i just leave the intended censored one, and uncensored only the profanity one, atleast for now.

 

[welcome2atlantis]

To be fair, Goku is on international influencer level nowadays.

 

[cryum]

The pacing jumps quite a bit

 

[lenovoaxioo]

He is not calm and reasonable person

 

[FlexSeal]

When I saw Kazu's sword in page 41, I thought it was a fishing pole. Thank you for the chapter.

 

[AnotherDuck]

Eh, I'm out.

 

[Nesiax]

looks promising so far

 

[Enalis]

Thank you for your work. Merry christmas ^^

 

[LoliTobrut]

When I saw Kazu's sword in page 41, I thought it was a fishing pole. Thank you for the chapter.

Yeah i thought so too you're welcome

Thank you for your work. Merry christmas ^^

You're welcome Yeah merry cristmast

 

[Riorio56]

The explanation of the lore little all over the place, still good and i hope not get axed

 

[Seinvolf]

Thank u always for ur great work...
^^...

I just hope they will explain how they made "the door", cz I think I didnt see him got into contact with a valkrie or something like that...
@.@...

 

[UhhExi]

To @LoliTobrut: I haven't read the following chapters yet, you're doing a good job, but there's just REALLY small errors as of this chapter, for example, there are some verbs that are written in the wrong tense, like "He throw...", it's should've been "He threw" instead, just for mentioning one of them

In any case, thanks for the translation!