A Parallel World With a 1:39 Male to Female Ratio Is Unexpectedly Normal (Fan Colored) - Vol. 1 Ch. 63 - Game Begins

[MangaDex]

 

[Geako]

Hi, This chapter had only 4 pages, I made it 8 pages, Last page 1 in Japanese made in 4 pages there. The original Japanese was more than that which was made in English translation. So I completed. But it was difficult to make it in single page. So, I made many pages, But I could not repeat panels. It takes away impact, hence I made changes in successive panels in different pages. I hope you can appreciate extra work.

This chapter was first full color panel I made, after six-month self learning. So, this chapter was already colored in October last year. After that I thought I could color them. This year I started coloring on Jan 1. I have complete 63 chapter in 4 months i.e. 120 days. On average one chapter per two day.

This month I did coloring of 16 chapters while Kisaragi sensei did only 3. With such relative speed I will be able to catch raw in 16 months. I was bored as heck due to waiting, so I took coloring.
Next chapters are huge. I think could not be able to do the same pace. I am getting busy due to some works, will not have time of this hobby.
Perhaps, I will be doing only 4 chapter per month. Let me see what I can manage. Thanks for being interested in my colorings.

 

[a55x]

rip Miku

 

[dimox]

Now, this is really nicely done. The Haiku is cute, no wonder it rendered the ladies speechless.
I would bet, a man doing poetry for a girl would be like miracles on a biblical scale in that world.
Kana and Hina laying their eyes on Miku after that was a nice edit as well.

I like it. Good job

By the way, I'm not knowledgable when it comes to Haiku, so just wondering.
Is it intentional that you wrote "they looks" and not "they look"... it sounds a bit weird.

 

[Geako]

Now, this is really nicely done. The Haiku is cute, no wonder it rendered the ladies speechless.
I would bet, a man doing poetry for a girl would be like miracles on a biblical scale in that world.
Kana and Hina laying their eyes on Miku after that was a nice edit as well.

I like it. Good job

Thanks. Paper falling from Miku is also edited in successive pages.

By the way, I'm not knowledgable when it comes to Haiku, so just wondering.
Is it intentional that you wrote "they looks" and not "they look"... it sounds a bit weird.

My mistake, I should change that...

 

[MrTurtleMan]

I choose to believe the cursive font you chose meant Sou put on a giga chad voice rather than just to indicate it was poetry

Thanks for your hard work

 

[MarqFJA87]

My mistake, I should change that...

You may also want to pick a different cursive font that is easier for the average reader to... well, read, because several times I've had to scratch my head trying to decipher what letter I was looking at. (Then again, I despise cursive with a passion due to being forced to learn it in school for several grades in a row in order to pass, so that may be a factor.)

 

[ipod123432]

Did not realize Satou was such a poet here. Thanks for the context, and the coloring of course.

 

[Geako]

You may also want to pick a different cursive font that is easier for the average reader to...

I edited capital Letters of M, A, N, L, T to make it look easier to read.

 

[dimox]

I edited capital Letters of M, A, N, L, T to make it look easier to read.

/me no typesetter
It's quick and dirty, but I tried to give it a short do-over myself for fun.
"Black Chancery" for the font - doesn't look too shabby:

Don't mind coloring - I was too lazy to look for the codes.

 

[MarqFJA87]

@Geako Say, is "lies" at the end supposed to conform to a rule of poetry/haiku, or is it also a typo?

 

[Geako]

@Geako Say, is "lies" at the end supposed to conform to a rule of poetry/haiku, or is it also a typo?

I don't know anything about Haiku, lies is there for rhyming.

 

[dimox]

I thought so as well.

It's tough to get the intended meaning of the source translated and make it rhyme on top of that. I'm far from being a native English speaker, but let me still try something for the fun. I'll use @Geako 's text as a base and take some artistical leeway. Well, there you have it:

Miku, as her Name implies,
has beautiful, Deep Red Eyes.
So pretty they look,
Charming, Miku-like...
a Heavenly Gaze therein lies.

One could go with "Lovely" instead of "Heavenly" and get it to a 7-7-5-5-7 pattern.
But I like it better this way.

 

[Evague]

The way she dropped the paper was hilarious 😆