A Parallel World With a 1:39 Male to Female Ratio Is Unexpectedly Normal (Fan Colored) - Vol. 1 Ch. 90 - Normal Boy
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Hm, just noticed - page 2, Hinata's bubble...
"He's a male scholarship who continues to attend school which is rather unusual for a male scholarship student."
It's in the original version as well, but I think it should be "He's a male scholarship student who..." here - leaving "student" out sounds kinda weird. Then again, using the exact same phrase twice in the same sentence is a bit awkward. I'd suggest to take a bit of artistic leeway here and change Hinatas bubble like this:
"Suzuki Tooru-kun, right? He's a male scholarship student who continues to attend school which is rather unusual."
or maybe use
"... He's someone who continues to attend school ..."
It's nothing major, though... if at some point you actually go over all the chapters again and want to fix typos and such, then maybe put it on the list.
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By the way, Kanaria is quite stylish, it's not just her hair. Seems the academy grants its students a bit of leeway when it comes to fine tuning their uniforms and Kanaria's attire looks prim despite her wearing a miniskirt - black tights make it look refined, and she's wearing the blazer and bow properly. In that regard, she's dressed similar to the Konno sisters who also use that kind of look, makes them appear professional. I really like it.
Hinata on the other hand wears half knee socks and she also uses a notably longer skirt compared to all other girls - seems as if she doesn't want to expose too much bare skin - she still does, though. And then there's Miku and her sloppy delinquent look which speaks for itself and actually, for a guard that might be effective - like she's telling other girls "don't mess with me, b!tches"...
Damn, can't wait for the next chapters.
But I saw the Hiatus note, so I guess I'll say it again. Don't burn yourself out. Just sort your stuff out and take your time. I mean, you are faster than Kisa-sensei right now and coloring close to 100 chapters is quite a feat already.
"He's a male scholarship who continues to attend school which is rather unusual for a male scholarship student."
It's in the original version as well, but I think it should be "He's a male scholarship student who..." here - leaving "student" out sounds kinda weird. Then again, using the exact same phrase twice in the same sentence is a bit awkward. I'd suggest to take a bit of artistic leeway here and change Hinatas bubble like this:
"Suzuki Tooru-kun, right? He's a male scholarship student who continues to attend school which is rather unusual."
or maybe use
"... He's someone who continues to attend school ..."
It's nothing major, though... if at some point you actually go over all the chapters again and want to fix typos and such, then maybe put it on the list.
-----
By the way, Kanaria is quite stylish, it's not just her hair. Seems the academy grants its students a bit of leeway when it comes to fine tuning their uniforms and Kanaria's attire looks prim despite her wearing a miniskirt - black tights make it look refined, and she's wearing the blazer and bow properly. In that regard, she's dressed similar to the Konno sisters who also use that kind of look, makes them appear professional. I really like it.
Hinata on the other hand wears half knee socks and she also uses a notably longer skirt compared to all other girls - seems as if she doesn't want to expose too much bare skin - she still does, though. And then there's Miku and her sloppy delinquent look which speaks for itself and actually, for a guard that might be effective - like she's telling other girls "don't mess with me, b!tches"...
Damn, can't wait for the next chapters.
But I saw the Hiatus note, so I guess I'll say it again. Don't burn yourself out. Just sort your stuff out and take your time. I mean, you are faster than Kisa-sensei right now and coloring close to 100 chapters is quite a feat already.
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