A Soon-To-Be-Yuri Happy Valentine's Day - Oneshot

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thank you for the chapter, they really went Nah, I'd yuri.
 
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you got the wrong website, the "tease and denial" section of nhentai is next door
 
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"Where is the rest?"
My personal out-of-the-arse theory is: 90% of mangaka probably could crap out some decent idea one in a while; 9% could actually put those ideas into a few pages; .9 a few volumes.
 
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Not really huge on how this was translated.

Page 1:

"You even add wrapping..." -> "It's always wrapped so beautifully every year."

Page 2:

All of the speech bubbles in the top half are Yuki's.
今年のはさ『友チョコ』じゃないって言ったらどうする?
The flow for this feels more like: "About this year... They're not 'friend choco.' What would you do if I said that?"

Page 3:
義理チョコ being translated as "friend chocolate" does not make much sense. Obligation/obligatory chocolate works much better.

Page 4:
Can I eat it all? -> Can I have some now?

Page 6:
Yuki is saying: "It won't be taken seriously."
Ouka is saying: "It felt like it was going to get serious."

How did さいこ become "See ya"
 

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