I said it before and I’ll say it again. The problem with spending the first six/seven chapters setting up the fact that “EVERYONE” hates Ana (except maybe 3 people) leaves a very souring bitter taste in the reader’s mouth. And the only way to rinse that flavor out is to overpower it with the sweet, savory sensation of their downfall and collapse.
Even now, nearly 30 chapters in, and all I can think about is how much I want her original family and kingdom to crumble into ruin. We already got a small snippet of how much poorer of a job her sister is performing without Ana there, her sister may have the heart to hold a charity event, but she doesn’t have the brain to work through the logistical nightmare that is fundraising and ration planning. Ana had both heart AND brain! PLUS an air of nobility to it. BUT IT ISN’T ENOUGH FOR ME. NOT. NEARLY. ENOUGH. Sure, one ruined charity event may shake the sister’s image a little but I want her to stumble hard. Bomb three in a row. Burn all that money. Cause her family to go into ruin. Let everyone see her for who she really is, a spoiled, pampered, selfish little twat who’s only good at surface level words. If she doesn’t get what she wants, SHE THREATENS TO KILL HERSELF! She doesn’t like nobles? HOW CAN SHE SAY THAT WHEN SHE IS A NOBLE!? She has tasted what being a commoner is like. She grew up with a rose engraved golden spoon and she thinks it’s for fucking free?? She’ll probably run away from home the moment things get dicey with her ‘true love’ while leaving her parents with no heir to the title!
Anyhow, what started as distaste for everyone turned into a full on rant about the sister. Typical of me. But yeah, I would say that’s my main issue with this manhua. There isn’t enough... revenge? So to speak? Like I’m happy for Ana and all but what I really want with my smoky charcoal blackened heart is just to see how much shit has gone down since Ana’s departure.