Absolute Obedience

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I was waiting SO LONG for a group to pick this up again. Reminded me of Doorei Yuugi and I enjoyed that a lot until the bad ending. Stonescape is cooking!
 
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it's good! bar the overly annoying cringy simp energy the main characters gives off sometimes, it's not bad. and that problem isn't really too big of an issue given that it has been toned down in most recent chapters, on ch 28 currently, so it's bearable.
 
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kinda good but has some issues

mc is a super loser, like at least get beat up with honor trying to fight or something instead of just not doing anything and getting bodied anyways

the pacing is kinda weird, it's not slow but it's just boring at times

fights are kinda dry

stuff doesn't make sense, like damage not accumulating properly like when you kick a dude in the legs you kinda expect there to be some damage ( like a dude can get beaten in the leg 10 times, get up fine just to go down in the next few jabs)

the romance is interesting but the mc is just soo much of a simp and a horny loser

try thinking how much more interesting this would be if the mc was like smart and calculative trying to use his abilities to his advantage, (preparing for fights, ambushing people actually fighting dirty) or like try to train himself to become stronger while having some honor and not being a horny simp super loser and also a shrimp with no attempt to improve himself

imagine if this had the same type of mc as Devil Returns to School Days it would be so much more entertaining

edit: after reading it more some things have been improved but a lot of my points still stands, edit2 : mc is now more cringe
 
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