Adolescent Love - Ch. 13 - What the hell is going on...? (2)

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LOL This is a great example of pacing that's too fast. There's no build up, to anything. After a second read, I understand the thought process but... what the hell is going on.
 
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it's going too fast, i hate the protag but nice art and he's hot- soooo i'll carry on reading
 

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