Adventurer's Guild Universal Advisor - Vol. 2 Ch. 8

[MangaDex]

 

[cerezeth]

Hello everyone! Happy new year! Please let me know if you spot any inconsistencies. Enjoy the read!

 

[Elhao]

Hey, happy new year (still a few hours away personally) and thank you. The protagonist's name is a bit inconsistent. For the majority of the chapter you went back to Red, however on page 20 Dill calls him Reto.

Otherwise it is nice to see the beginning of the most anticipated part of this kind of story: The original party's ruin due to being idiots.

 

[lesseffective]

 

[Haru777]

Finally, I just kept glancing at this waiting for the hero's teams downfall.

 

[hypo]

Hey, happy new year (still a few hours away personally) and thank you. The protagonist's name is a bit inconsistent. For the majority of the chapter you went back to Red, however on page 20 Dill calls him Reto.

Otherwise it is nice to see the beginning of the most anticipated part of this kind of story: The original party's ruin due to being idiots.

Also, on page 5, we get Miirazel and Milazel ...

 

[FloorRoof]

That Elena's got some guts to rush in and block an enormous cleaver with her scepter to defend a partymate. Too bad she didn't have the same enthusiasm when MC needed help against the hero, so those guts are about to be spilled on the cave floor.
And those are some cool-looking monsters there. They seem to move faster than they look.

 

[Lioslin]

Honestly rather than the old party falling apart because of losing MC it feels like they fell apart because of the new guy being a dumbass with a hammer. Leader boy giving the new guy a new weapon at the dungeon entrance was stupid as well. Plus the mage wasn't helping by not picking up the slack from the jack of all trades they kicked out but most of this came down the new guy just completely throwing the fight not them missing the MC

 

[Mecha_G]

This is why I read these titles, to see the MC's former party fall apart without him.

 

[JaceG13]

Honestly rather than the old party falling apart because of losing MC it feels like they fell apart because of the new guy being a dumbass with a hammer. Leader boy giving the new guy a new weapon at the dungeon entrance was stupid as well. Plus the mage wasn't helping by not picking up the slack from the jack of all trades they kicked out but most of this came down the new guy just completely throwing the fight not them missing the MC

Ehh, I'm not as hard on the new guy.

With regards to the hero's first complaint, you really shouldn't be right next to the guy with the big weapon.

And the second part, where he sent an enemy flying in the hero's direction, I'm also willing to let that slide because he tried to fight with a dagger til he nearly got overwhelmed, doesn't leave much wiggle room to worry about much more than pushing them off you.

Also, that means they got separated quite badly if the hammer guy sends a monster flying forward and it lands near the hero.

Don't even know where the mage and healer are in relation to them but I bet there's enemies between the hero/hammer guy & them.

Altogether, they just seem bad, like, these problems should've been glaringly obvious before MC got kicked kinda bad.

 

[cerezeth]

Thanks for noticing the mistake guys. Sorry I was rushing the translate a little as I was travelling for a holiday. I will amend it again when I am back. Hope everyone had a good holiday!

Edit: I have amended the mistakes. Thanks guys!