Aekanaru

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plot makes 0 sense.as you all know,the human mind gets bored very easily.theres no way she would have stayed on that mountain for 800 years.she's not even limited to only wandering around the mountain.

the God could only appear because a vessel went to his lair.this God could hardly control whether she wanted to leave or not.
 
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I was supposed to be working. I am a roughneck, blue collar guy working in a lumber yard and I run a chainsaw and forklift all day building flooring packages.

Instead, I binge-read this, man-crying in the back forty.

10/10
 
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10. There's no other explanations needed. Progression of story itself is well made. Satisfactory until climax. Highly recommended.
 
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Saw a video of this on YouTube and came to read it. One of the best decision I've ever made in my life!
 
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nice, cute and finished. got a little worried with the unexpected ntr but the situation had been resolved quickly.
 

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