Again My Life - Ch. 1

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Hmmm… a bit too in-your-face, I prefer when there's more of a build-up. The way it was done in this chapter, the premise sounds almost frivolous. I won't be following, but might give it another try when there are more chapters out, if I remember.
 
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@Kendama to be honest the first chap is kind of a let down, but the future chaps are so great, I mean at least they get you a little excited.
 
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He gave her too much work so she had to pull an all nighter 5 days in a row ?
or the less fun explanation of karma.
 
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I really hope he actually doesn't care about morals after all that becoming evil talk and is not just the typical villain mc who is evil in name only
 
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Pretty sure dude got a mob special at the river... So maybe she can only see the "official cause of death" as I imagine that the bad guy messed with the reports.
 

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