Akai Kiri no Naka kara - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - An Unfortunate Child

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I get papercuts just from the edginess.

Time to check and see if this aged into wine or it turns into sewage gunk.
 
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I hate those glaring plot holes. Murdering noblemen for several years without being caught? In the 19th century? And killed by some random burglars? And what's with the boy's clearly african name? Even in jest and as a poor person you wouldn't have had named your kid like that. That shit goes into a public registry.

Go fuck yourself author.
 
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Everyone's complaining about the story but all I have to say is that it was honestly a great plot twist.
 
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"Hot damn, this was just bad. Three pages of getting picked up by a random pedo, getting raped by a pedo and then killing the pedo. Too rushed and packed"
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So...if he could kill the pedo that easily, why did he let himself get raped first?
 
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@DeOneChester cuz he's a true blue psychopath. most people would resist out of fear but he doesn't know how to feel that. instead, his thought process became 'what's the most effective, safest way to kill this guy' and since he did not have anything that could be used as a weapon when he was thrown onto the bed, he chose to bide his time and wait til the next chance he gets. a regular person might feel sickened, traumatized and mentally crippled by the experience but that is a weakness only possible due to their subconscious desires for a 'happy life' that doesn't tolerate flaws(mental scars) which he doesn't have since he struggles to even feel alive most of the time.
 
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You thought the mother was bad... apple doesn't fall far from the tree
 
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so she hates children but had a child with someone then proceeded to keep him around instead of putting him in an orphanage
 
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@roues Isn't it because of the 'job' he takes care of
Anyway, this smells kinda like Bastard. But the kid is similar to the parent
 

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