Akebi-chan no Sailor Fuku - Vol. 15 Ch. 80.1 - [Short Story] Ōkuma Minoru's Morning

[MangaDex]

 

[Gaporigo]

Never change Yasuko

 

[Tcof]

we become light novel now ?

 

[pikachiu24]

The cleaner and redrawer must have enjoyed working on this chapter haha.

 

[Lilisionnach]

Yasuko’s crushing hard

 

[BlackwingYu]

Yasuko's letting her crush slip as always, but I do love Minoru's gushing about animals

 

[ciera]

Thanks for the chapter

 

[abxgh]

So cute

 

[itmealice]

aww this is adorable

 

[Babymech2]

No. I'm sorry. I'm glad for the people who liked this, but it reads like a ChatGPT short story. Lots of writing but no significance. "Initiating a familiar exchange" my ass

 

[MiniMarps]

No. I'm sorry. I'm glad for the people who liked this, but it reads like a ChatGPT short story. Lots of writing but no significance. "Initiating a familiar exchange" my ass

Lol chill dude. Hiro had a major art exhibition in October, was too busy with that to draw a "real" chapter for November, but still gave us this. Would have been totally understandable if he hadn't given us anything. Sorry if it wasn't good enough for you.

 

[Babymech2]

Lol chill dude. Hiro had a major art exhibition in October, was too busy with that to draw a "real" chapter for November, but still gave us this. Would have been totally understandable if he hadn't given us anything. Sorry if it wasn't good enough for you.

That's ok, as long as you're genuinely sorry

 

[Gubb]

No. I'm sorry. I'm glad for the people who liked this, but it reads like a ChatGPT short story. Lots of writing but no significance. "Initiating a familiar exchange" my ass

I agree that it's a bit verbose in a few spots, but imo that's exactly what a "light novel chapter" of this manga should be. It almost feels like he took the storyboard for this chapter and starting describing it, panel by panel, and the almost excessive descriptions help paint the picture to match the level of detail he puts in his artwork. For a slice of life / art flex manga that isn't afraid to spend (checks notes) 16 pages drawing 65 pictures of Akebi playing jump rope, I think it fits the bill pretty well.

 

[Eggsburst]

No. I'm sorry. I'm glad for the people who liked this, but it reads like a ChatGPT short story. Lots of writing but no significance. "Initiating a familiar exchange" my ass

Sometimes, a meandering prose helps set an easy going pace for the story, and I thought was a good fit here - though, I'm sure it what we read and what was said in its original language had different, if similar feel. I'm sorry you didn't enjoy it.

 

[Eggsburst]

Thanks for the translation of this chapter, or rather, short story

 

[TanyaTheEvil]

That was a nice story, thanks for the translation

 

[the_legendary_klobb]

Boo, no bath illustration!