Akebi-chan no Sailor Fuku - Vol. 6 Ch. 36 - Okay

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Hahahaha that bitch got blasted away by Erika's natural beauty ... I mean, Akebi is one thing alone but if you put her close to Erika that's a killer combo, but yeah, sadly there's a lot of girls like that and of course her followers too, and I get the felling the picked followers that make HER stand out, so classic bitch.

That aside, amazing, for a moment I thought "Run Akebi! Before some agency tries to steal you away from your friends!"
 
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Erika was an absolute Chad in this chapter, dang 😲 Smooth operator and a half.
 
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Page 3 Panel 3:
"crepe" https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Crêpe

Page 10 Panel 3 Bubble 1:
"from"

Page 10 Panel 3 Bubble 2:
"from"

Page 10 Panel 4 SFX Text:
Seems like you accidentally capitalized the L. Like this: "PLease".

Page 11 Panel 7
"from" please learn how to spell this word.

Page 13 Panel 3
"tough" not "though". Two completely different things.

Page 15 Panel 4
"I'd rather be sitting in class." Current sentence makes no sense. At the very least, "I'd rather sit in class."

A few other mistakes as well, but not worth fixing without checking raws or more effort.
 
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Cheers dude, I appreciate the input. I'm on my own for good 95-100% of the work that goes into each chapter so you're always welcome aboard again if you feel like giving chapters a read before error riddled versions get spread across half the aggregators.
 
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Thanks dude. I was just preemptively compensating for mixing up the order of o and r in the other direction later on :^). I need a break.
inb4 don't sweat it, your chapters were always full of spelling errors
 
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This is the stuff! Erikaaaaaaaaaaaaªªªªªªªªªªªªªªªªªª!

I don't care if it's platonic, but if you gaze at other girls like that you might end up stealing their hearts by accident!
 
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Beautiful art, Komichi's boundless enthusiasm, some touching character development for Usagihara-san and a dash of les yay. Epic chapter.
 
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Ah, I know that crepe shop on page 3!
Unfortunately, it looks like it's permanently closed now, but it was out in Shibuya and you couldn't see Tokyo Tower from it.
Apparently there's a bubble tea stand in its place now. Funny thing is that it used to be a different kind of shop not long before it was a crepe stand. I guess things move quickly in Shibuya.

Edit: Also, somehow Usagihara has become one of my favorite characters.
 
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@DefinMS Yeah, maybe. I don't really want to pick up more work, but if it's just a simple read through and this is what you produce without any proofreading or external QC, then sure, it should be an easy QC. Message me on discord.
 
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I was hoping for something from the little gothy one, but nevermind. Once again the dynamism of the art is astounding, and the way Akebi is in her own world and earnestly passionate is so endearing. Her earnestness and positivity will no doubt navigate the incoming unexpected drama.
 

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