Aku no Joou no Kiseki - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

[SapphireDemon]

Y'all are being very harsh to our MC here. The girl has been isekai'd for maybe a week max and you're expecting her to be running things? At least in sim games you have an idea of the people involved, the claimate and terrain, and the resources at your disposal. MC girl has none of that right now, she's got to get that before you can expect her to be asserting herself.

 

[RubyG8396]

@SapphireDemon Nothing is wrong with having a naive airhead MC. It's a useful plot device for giving exposition. I just feel like every man here is manipulating her. One of the things you have to establish in a reverse harem is trust, but I find none of the males here is trustworthy. I get that the first thing the author wanted to establish with each of the guys was sex appeal, but besides being especially thirsty, I feel like these guys have no personality traits. I would normally be okay with undefined personalities in the beginning but their only personality trait which is being thirsty sounds a whole lot like she's surrounded by rapists to me.

But now I no longer understand the plot line so I don't really care about the guys anymore. Right now I'm trying to figure out what kind of story is this? Is it a story about a baby maker having sex with a bunch of overbearing men, or is it about a girl learning to be queen? I feel like not even the MC has a defined personality so far. I don't know man. I wanna say that this is just bad storytelling techniques but maybe its a bad story. I'm not sure if I'll keep reading later chapters.

 

[riflow]

Interesting, so the Queen is trying to protect mari. I guess she activated her divine spell knowing it would kill her and the remnants are trying to guarantee that her new life ends less tragically.

 

[Byonbyon]

Just go the concubine route T.T

 

[Sleepyyyyy]

So if she’s not with Leon she is just going to kill herself for the country? Wth kind of logic is that? “you can live without her” so she’ll just die??? Yikes mc are you okay

Idk I was open for a harem end with Fley and Darius but they’re both just too forceful. And somehow I still like that Leon the least?

I just feel there was too much build up for the first two for them to just dump her on the third one even though all he did so far was try to kill her and yell at her?🤔🤪

 

[missy115]

my feminist side is quaking 😂😂
its been too long since ive read a series with a FL like her

 

[Mokappang]

In first chapter she is such a badass queen and so cool! Later, she become ordinary.. Not that ordynary is bad.. Its just not fulfilling my expectation..
And wth with the queen pushing leon to mari? Whats more important is mari's feeling! Tbh i really really support darius and fley.. I dont really like leon's weak character.. This is a harem genre right? Can i hope for this really really a harem? Not just initally harem which will turn into usual romance? TwT i wish..

 

[ParagonNight]

This is garbage. Like I get who this is appealing to but any semblance of the first chapter has been thrown out the window. Dropped

 

[Diamondmya25]

She’s the ruler of the country with unquestionable power and the guys won’t even ask for consent?!? ✨wtf✨