Akuninzura Shita B-kyuu Boukensha - Shujinkou to Sono Osananajimi-tachi no Papa ni Naru - Ch. 12.1 - The Hero's Worries (1)

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Why did Lutz sniff the hero's butt? :huh:
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He smelled something un-heroic in there.
 
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Page 5 speech bubbles are messed up.
"Pardon the intrusion" in the top left panel should be attached to the hero in the bottom left's speech bubble. The "For Starters, I'd like to do introductions. Would you gather everyone?" speech bubble should be attached to our protag's speech bubble in the top left. And the "Come on in~" bubble should be the one with the girls face in it on the bottom right panel.
 
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page 5 panels 2 to 3 dialogue seems a little mixed up.

Shouldn't "Pardon the intrusion" be a line for Aless?
Asking to gather everyone for introductions is something that should be attributed to Grey, isn't it?
Then, "Come on in" should be Ariamel's line in panel 2.
 

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