Akuyaku Reijou no Chichioya ni Tensei shitanode, Tsuma to Musume wo Dekiai shimasu - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[MangaDex]

 

[TempusAeternitas]

thanks for the chapter, seems like a unique premise, hope to see more 👌

 

[yun1que]

New concept of this already mainstream villainnes trope but I like this. Hopefully it's good

 

[SavingPrivateRightHand]

Page 22, missing a translation for the bubble on the bottom right. Ditto on Page 36 in the top left panel.

The pronouns on Page 27 seem to be inconsistent with other dialogue. ("Don't ever let  him set foot..." referring to the elderly woman instructor "hag")

 

[NutzYaboku77]

We got the fiance's pov, we got the servants pov, we got the childhood friends pov, we got the brothers pov, we got the mob villagers pov. It was about time we get the dad pov 🤣

 

[Joemassie728]

Idk the mom not being there for daughter is crazy to me. I cant accept her as a victim

 

[Fushiginiku]

I've read this as a WN. Looking forward to seeing how the manga version runs. It was basically just a diabetes-inducing sugar rush, but I did enjoy everything except what felt like fujo-baiting regarding the male 'targets'. I think I stopped reading only because the translation had stalled.

 

[xyzzy]

We got the fiance's pov, we got the servants pov, we got the childhood friends pov, we got the brothers pov, we got the mob villagers pov. It was about time we get the dad pov 🤣

At this point, I want to see a series where all of this happens at the same time. Like, everyone around the villainess is a reincarnated person who wants to prevent her from her bad end, except for the villainess herself

 

[Desuka]

For the wife, it's all lovey dovey
For the daughter, hits pipe

 

[Elhao]

I'm not even through half the chapter and I've seen four different romanizations for the father's name (Callis, Charis, Kalis and Caris). Have some pride in your work.

Regarding the chapter, I find it weird how very accepting both wife and daughter are of dad's sudden complete change after years of neglect and abuse.

 

[AthalosJ]

I've read this as a WN. Looking forward to seeing how the manga version runs. It was basically just a diabetes-inducing sugar rush, but I did enjoy everything except what felt like fujo-baiting regarding the male 'targets'. I think I stopped reading only because the translation had stalled.

Glad to see a fellow reader of the webnovel here, I hope the manga adaptation does it justice though my opinion on the novel is pretty much the same as yours, the fujo-baiting was gross though it was minor as you said

 

[Shamz]

Im interested in the "reincarnated as dad" but i dont like how unnatural and rushed this starting is. In 1 chapter, in 1 day, dude kinda dealt with the bases already? theres so much wasted content. Show the reader how he adjust to his reincarnation. Take the time to slowly unfold the problems while keeping things feel natural. Then have the mc solve things properly.

Being direct could be a good thing, but theres still a need to make it feel natural. Theres also the mc character being the bland but kind japanese person. Thats such a boring character. I guess this is the style of wish fulfilling stories so my mistake for my high standards.

 

[sarusa]

Page 22, missing a translation for the bubble on the bottom right. Ditto on Page 36 in the top left panel.

The pronouns on Page 27 seem to be inconsistent with other dialogue. ("Don't ever let  him set foot..." referring to the elderly woman instructor "hag")

It's obviously MTL, several tells like the pronoun thing and handling danna-sama completely inconsistent because the LLM can't keep track. But! It's certainly readable and not sure I've ever read this premise before, so why not? I'll read the next couple to see where it's going.

 

[MisterMango]

I love my wife and daughter, simple as.

No wait a second that was memories of a past life.

 

[biologist]

Is there any manga/ln like this but protag decide to do a genocide run?

 

[OmnivoreReader]

Damn a DILF with mustache? Count me in.

 

[Kurotsubaki]

They remade the manga? I mean, the previous one the dad look too young iirc.
Though he's still looks young and less rough here considering his background that'll be explained in later chapters
I expect him to look close to the S rank musume's father, the red ogre

Edit : Whoops, it's a different series. It's this one
https://mangadex.org/title/142ff914...kawaii-musume-no-shibou-flag-ha-zenbu-orimasu

 

[DeaObliDex]

We got the fiance's pov, we got the servants pov, we got the childhood friends pov, we got the brothers pov, we got the mob villagers pov. It was about time we get the dad pov 🤣

Now we need the mom version. Or better yet Grandmother version jk jk

 

[yuriie]

I know its MTL
(manga translator ai ) but please at least give it proper edit and proofread

 

[Hicleric]

...stepbrother route?

Not a surprise at all, actually. What was really surprising was the pencil-stache. Don't see too many daddy characters that dapper