Akuyaku Reijou no Chichioya ni Tensei shitanode, Tsuma to Musume wo Dekiai shimasu - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[selfiesturluson]

I wonder how long the manga adaptation process was, because I read this WN years ago. I’m happy to see it made, though!

 

[Eeliejun]

So, the idea is fresh but not sure about it... It felt really rushed for a chapter 1. Like meeting the wife, the servants, the daughter, and then fixing the tutor. Like this could have been spread out for sure. But yeah this is MTL for sure and personally it can work with a lot of work and heavy eddting but every MTL user just don't check the translation. Like I am not sure if it is MTL or not but hate that she calls him master. Like I tought it was maybe the real husband made her say but she also switches to my husband, so is she using both or is it MTL problems.

Will keep a eye on it

 

[lolikonjack]

finally some good fucking food.

 

[lesseffective]

I'm not even through half the chapter and I've seen four different romanizations for the father's name (Callis, Charis, Kalis and Caris). Have some pride in your work.

Regarding the chapter, I find it weird how very accepting both wife and daughter are of dad's sudden complete change after years of neglect and abuse.

A master list for names is always going to be an essential tool, but especially in a series that may have a number of people, places, and things (in the case of a fantasy series magics, skills, items, etc.) that are referenced repeatedly.