Akuyaku Reijou no Chichioya ni Tensei shitanode, Tsuma to Musume wo Dekiai shimasu - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[selfiesturluson]

I wonder how long the manga adaptation process was, because I read this WN years ago. I’m happy to see it made, though!

 

[Eeliejun]

So, the idea is fresh but not sure about it... It felt really rushed for a chapter 1. Like meeting the wife, the servants, the daughter, and then fixing the tutor. Like this could have been spread out for sure. But yeah this is MTL for sure and personally it can work with a lot of work and heavy eddting but every MTL user just don't check the translation. Like I am not sure if it is MTL or not but hate that she calls him master. Like I tought it was maybe the real husband made her say but she also switches to my husband, so is she using both or is it MTL problems.

Will keep a eye on it

 

[lolikonjack]

finally some good fucking food.

 

[lesseffective]

I'm not even through half the chapter and I've seen four different romanizations for the father's name (Callis, Charis, Kalis and Caris). Have some pride in your work.

Regarding the chapter, I find it weird how very accepting both wife and daughter are of dad's sudden complete change after years of neglect and abuse.

A master list for names is always going to be an essential tool, but especially in a series that may have a number of people, places, and things (in the case of a fantasy series magics, skills, items, etc.) that are referenced repeatedly.

 

[KyoN007]

My man reincarnated and got a beautiful wife and daughter.
I see what you tried there my guy- no need for a stepbrother

 

[KyoN007]

We got the fiance's pov, we got the servants pov, we got the childhood friends pov, we got the brothers pov, we got the mob villagers pov. It was about time we get the dad pov 🤣

I need the names for all (some are familiar)

 

[NutzYaboku77]

I need the names for all (some are familiar)

1. Jishou Akuyaku Reijou na Kon'yakusha no Kansatsu Kiroku. (Fiance) (There was another one but I can't recall it.)

2. Akuyaku Reijou no Shitsuji-sama: Hametsu Flag wa Ore ga Tsubusasete Itadakimasu. (Butler/servant)

3. Yamiochi Last Boss Reijou no Osananajimi ni Tensei Shita. Ore ga Shindara Bad End Kakutei nanode Saikyou ni Natta kedo, Mou Yamiochi "Yandere-ka" Shitemasen ka? (Childhood friend/butler)

4. I Was Reincarnated As The Older Brother Of A Villainess Destined to Die (brother)

5. Chounin A wa Akuyaku Reijou o Doushitemo Sukuitai: Dobu to Sora to Koori no Himegimi (Villager).

It took me a while since I haven't bookmarked any of them save for one. Also, I couldn't find the Brother POV manga I intended to. Can't remember the title and the only one which shows up is the one I listed at no. 4. Hope you don't mind my yapping.

 

[asteconn]

A non-Sebas butler!

 

[auladi]

translate Brazil already 10 chapters

 

[radiantmemories451]

Wait, why does the novel have gl & bl tags??? I can't post a screenshot otherwise I would. But this doesn't seem like that type of story at all, even with the younger gen.

 

[Nobi]

They are really scrapping the bottom of the barrel at this point.

 

[REDRED]

Thanks for the series. it was good.

 

[Miserys_End]

OK, is there really a point to the over dramatization of this setting? Oh sure waking up to that scenario would be heavy, but the daughter is 4 and reincarnated dad has at least a decade to navigate the troubled waters ahead.

Hells, forget the butterflies, the changes he has made to his wife and daughter's environment should drastically change the future.

So while there could be all sorts of narrative issues that crop up, I can't see how she would be forced into the villainous route unless he is totally incompetent.

 

[TheCasualEnjoyer]

Man looks like gregor from limbus company but more well put together.

 

[PhoenixDen]

Is this one ever getting updated? I hope so.

 

[Serverclosed]

I read the WN years ago and the premise is good, but the writing wasnt sadly. Btw, a fair point to say early, because the stupid author took his sweet time to say it, is about the previous duke, he was sexually abused by a maid when he was a child, therefor he develop a mild case of misogamy or gynophobia (I dont remember which was.) It was basically a miracle he managed to get that child. Nobody knows that btw, tho mc keeps shitting on the previous duke even after the trauma.

 

[PhycoKrusk]

It is interesting to me, but how hard is it to give it an editing pass for grammar?

 

[Advent-Seph]

What's with the Japanese and always tossing in a little gangrape here and there? This story absolutely did not need it. Just tell us she gets convicted and banished. No need to tell us she also got gangraped ffs...

 

[Yukkuridemoiiyo]

Are you still working on future updates of this series?

 

[baconcat]

the indecisive prince who showed interest in anopther woman despite having a fiancé

So, the prince is not just indecisive but also bi?

Because that's what fiancé means. A male marriage-partner-to-be.

You want to spout fancy terms, it helps knowing what they actually mean. Reduces the risk of embarrassing yourself as a pretentious poseur. I suggest you familiarize yourself with the difference between a fiancé and a fiancée.

Also,

as best I can

What? Last I checked, "as [adjective] (as)" requires the positive form, not the superlative. Do you also say "as fastest as that car", "as reddest as that flower", "as juiciest as that steak"? Then how the fuck can you form a sentence with "as best (as)"? How can something be the same as something yet be unparalleled? (You know, as in what the superlative is?)