Akuyaku Reijou no Nariagari ~Ringoku de Houseki no Seijo to Yobareru Made~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

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When you notice her "Jewel Eater" Rep that you assume was restricted to her Home Kingdom somehow made it as far as the Empire! You realize the Author's premise HEDGES on "misunderstandings!" Meaning this won't be THE LAST TIME this shit happens, no matter what "Jewel Eater" is stuck to FMC because otherwise the writer can't

And I'm VERY curious on what the writer is doing here with her explaining nothing at all and just acts nuts! (Guy above me said it best, she's acting VERY Autistic, I feel the artists and writer BADLY convey how FMC acted at that moment! Her "Smile" I can get, but really, no one with common sense would act that way trying to help someone they met! She even acts SHOCKED just making claims with no real proof and acting a maniac, also DEMANDING to hand it over to HERSELF was idiotic! This also had the Artists and Writer fuck themselves over as they should have had the Maid's bring up her "Villainess Name" that indicates the Lies about her reached the Empire AFTER that scene! By having FMC know BEFORE, it just makes her look even MORE stupid that she acted like that because it just PROVES the BS about her being obsessive over Jewelry! I mean she COULDN'T wait till AFTER to talk with the Prince about it, she had to act like "she never had a Ounce of Etiquette Training? I refuse to see what happened as aything but a LITERAL unsubtle IDIOT/CONFLICT BALL for the sake of conflict has to be something with her that makes her hyperfocus on the task she places herself on that she only realizes too late that she's fucked herself over! Like as the Prince said last chapter, by smacking the crown, even if a fake, and with her "artifically enforced" bad reputation! Even if she was correct, she still allowed her enemy, her ex "an excuse to condemn her!")
 
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This is what I hate in josei. It always has to be so over the top and make everything seems dramatic. The antagonists, as always are dumb af and act out of pure spite with no cunning whatsoever. The FL got EQ of a fucking toddler and I'm pretty sure the MLs influence in the story would become pretty insignificant as we progress thru the story and all he'd do is wag his tail around the FL.
 
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Well, that's a nail in the coffin... on many levels.

Wow... for all her supposed intelligence it's almost as if she is some kind of otaku hikikomori with a social disorder and who's only human interactions are her overworked brother and some random duds that watch over her as she mines.

Not that that should excuse the author's complete lack of writing talent, but it was an interesting premise for a few chapters. Now it just feels like it's going to turn into a repetitive gag the author will write about ad nauseam until the headsmen comes with his axe...
 

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you're not normally supposed to make your MC disliked by even the readers :huh:
 

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