Akuyaku Reijou to Kichiku Kishi - Vol. 1 Ch. 2
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Da fuck is the point of having the Second Chapter be a fucking flashback... in the middle of a sex scene?!
i mean, unless there isnt going to be any seggs, and that's fine, but... maybe some plot could happen? Since it's only the second chapter?
Yanno, have them bang, then get to her being married to him, and as they discuss how to take down His Most Idiotic Highness, ShitPrince of Gullible, he could reveal how he's always had feelings for her?
I mean... that's basic writing stuff, right?
i mean, unless there isnt going to be any seggs, and that's fine, but... maybe some plot could happen? Since it's only the second chapter?
Yanno, have them bang, then get to her being married to him, and as they discuss how to take down His Most Idiotic Highness, ShitPrince of Gullible, he could reveal how he's always had feelings for her?
I mean... that's basic writing stuff, right?
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