Albus Changes the World

[Chester6]

Man, what a sad story. He doesn't about his live. He just wants to save Fiona-chan and the rest of his comrades

 

[Sokari13]

Dont let this be the last chapter for the love of god.

 

[Fever]

Dont let this be the last chapter for the love of god.

Surprise?

 

[Zeiferl]

man, i would be freaking mad being him, all of this, just for the mfs to throw everything.

 

[ismaelh]

I got to chapter 17 and I already know I'll be eating good tonight. It's one of the great ones.

Also: Change da world... my final message. Goodbye.

 

[Gerdinnyo]

This is great to masterpiece tier. I am sadly lacking the words right now to express my thoughts, because I have slept too little last night, but I'll try to give a small summary. The main selling point of this story is the characters and their relationships. And that is done beautifully. The worldbuilding, while rather basic, is slowly being revealed and added to with each new character, loop, or story told, making you think and wonder.

I do really like this and hope for more.

 

[george_w_69]

Perfect, Previously unknown levels of kino, Masterpiece, Type of shi so good I would leave my signature below.
Now if you'll allow me, I will cry while shouting "KINOOO" until someone calls the police on me

 

[SUPER7X]

The nonlinearity of this series really ruins it. At any point, during any threat, they simply flashback to a previous timeline where something useful happened or some other character we've haven't met yet was met and ope amazingly they're immediately useful right now. Had it been an entirely linear narrative, with us going through each loop in real time, it would've been so much better. Planted seeds would've had time to grow instead of things beings used in the very same chapter we learn about them. Sadly, that would've taken years and I doubt such a chance would've been afforded to the creators, so we get… this instead. Simply can't recommend.