i apologize if i came off as rude, i'm well aware of how difficult english and it's rules can be to a non-english speaker, i only intended to help. that said, again, thank you for your hard work.
If it helps send me the translations and I’ll proof read them for spelling and grammar. Though that’s all I’ll be able to do. Let me know whether yes or no.
Thanks for spelling out how the heroine needs to be pure, Mr. Villain. If you didn't do that, your plan might have worked.
Also, honestly MC probably shouldn't have lost his virginity because I'm willing to bet if he did, and the master found out about it, Suzu wouldn't receive a happy ending...