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Thoroughly enjoyed this read, although I would have been interested in different couplings (Hazuki making things difficult for me lolol).
I felt like at times it was too heteronormative, as in "I am a boy therefore I like girls", and "I'm a girl so that is why I might be developing feelings for a guy" etc. Since the author was the one writing the characters in the first place I feel like it would have been possible to write a gay character that actually gets a romance. There are two separate characters who have pining crushes on their friends and both basically have the same character arc and one could have been a little different at least.
The development is really interesting until the last 10 or so chapters which I felt were a rushed end. Even if the result is the same it would have felt better if it had a little more time to settle things and feel satisfactory. Some characters didn't really seem to have a conclusive arc in comparison to others.
But it's a solid coming of age regardless.
I felt like at times it was too heteronormative, as in "I am a boy therefore I like girls", and "I'm a girl so that is why I might be developing feelings for a guy" etc. Since the author was the one writing the characters in the first place I feel like it would have been possible to write a gay character that actually gets a romance. There are two separate characters who have pining crushes on their friends and both basically have the same character arc and one could have been a little different at least.
The development is really interesting until the last 10 or so chapters which I felt were a rushed end. Even if the result is the same it would have felt better if it had a little more time to settle things and feel satisfactory. Some characters didn't really seem to have a conclusive arc in comparison to others.
But it's a solid coming of age regardless.