Anata ga Amaku Nedaru Made - Vol. 2 Ch. 8 - The Night Before

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I don't know if a femdom edition of the classic "I can't believe this shitty seinen/josei is not porn without the moneyshot" trope is what we needed. The art is amazing, but holy shit, why they don't just make it full blown hentai.
 
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I don't know if a femdom edition of the classic "I can't believe this shitty seinen/josei is not porn without the moneyshot" trope is what we needed. The art is amazing, but holy shit, why they don't just make it full blown hentai.
i mean this author has tons of hentai doujins too idk why this is one isn't lol but it being a long series is nice
 
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i mean this author has tons of hentai doujins too idk why this is one isn't lol but it being a long series is nice
Make a long series about what exactly? Is not like these are realized characters following a an actual story, they are a couple of horndogs and we are reading them getting into it, nothing more. We don't know shit about them, what they are like apart of some basic info we get, there is even less worldbuilding than a slice of life....

This doesn't even classify as smut, is just porn without explicit images, why would I want to read porn about the same 2 doofus if I'm denied the actual thing that makes it a realized work? I'd rather have oneshots with the complete thing.
 
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Make a long series about what exactly? Is not like these are realized characters following a an actual story, they are a couple of horndogs and we are reading them getting into it, nothing more. We don't know shit about them, what they are like apart of some basic info we get, there is even less worldbuilding than a slice of life....

This doesn't even classify as smut, is just porn without explicit images, why would I want to read porn about the same 2 doofus if I'm denied the actual thing that makes it a realized work? I'd rather have oneshots with the complete thing.
cause it's cool and seeing that little fella being a sub is great and i want more
 
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Make a long series about what exactly? Is not like these are realized characters following a an actual story, they are a couple of horndogs and we are reading them getting into it, nothing more. We don't know shit about them, what they are like apart of some basic info we get, there is even less worldbuilding than a slice of life....

This doesn't even classify as smut, is just porn without explicit images, why would I want to read porn about the same 2 doofus if I'm denied the actual thing that makes it a realized work? I'd rather have oneshots with the complete thing.
The story is about a couple exploring their sexuality. The build-up between sex scenes is important because we're seeing how they're changing from an innocent couple to a debauched one. Yuki is learning how to be a better dom and achieving her sexual fantasy while the boy is slowly being corrupted by the new pleasure. Considering the artist's other works, it's only going to get more and more dirty. The slow burn adds to the eroticism when you know what's in store
 
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I actually liked the premise and beginning of this series. But this chapter right here highlights a major issue.

She's just lying to him. She's outright willfully lying to his face. She has zero intention of it lasting only five days, and the text right here shows that.

It would be one thing if she honestly intended five days at first and then later on changed her mind. I can understand that. It's already happened before, where she said she won't do "that" anymore, but then they both changed their minds. That's generally fine.

I liked the start of this because it was a couple who, although shy and embarrassed and hesitant, were still willing to be at least a bit honest about what they were doing. This isn't that. This is her lying.
 
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I actually liked the premise and beginning of this series. But this chapter right here highlights a major issue.

She's just lying to him. She's outright willfully lying to his face. She has zero intention of it lasting only five days, and the text right here shows that.

It would be one thing if she honestly intended five days at first and then later on changed her mind. I can understand that. It's already happened before, where she said she won't do "that" anymore, but then they both changed their minds. That's generally fine.

I liked the start of this because it was a couple who, although shy and embarrassed and hesitant, were still willing to be at least a bit honest about what they were doing. This isn't that. This is her lying.
Dude she's a sadist, lying (girl boss tactic) is kinda expected
 
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Dude she's a sadist, lying (girl boss tactic) is kinda expected
First, sadism doesn't really mean lying. It just doesn't.

Second, even if it's expected, that's just all the more reason I don't like her and this relationship.
 
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First, sadism doesn't really mean lying. It just doesn't.

Second, even if it's expected, that's just all the more reason I don't like her and this relationship.
sadism doesn't mean lying
That's were you misunderstand, sadism is whatever the hell the dominatrix wants, if she misleads you about how long she wants you to abstain, then you follow her instructions without question or get punished. Simple as
 

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