I did it on a whim. Hopefully someone snipes me soon. I had forgotten how much work this was.
Despite the complaints, I think this is quite good for a first translation done solo. The English makes sense and reads well, overall. It's easy to follow even the longer and more complex passages, such as the conversation between Hiro and his father. The typesetting is distracting at times, but I understand that not everyone has time to redraw 34 pages. That said, a bit more care in text placement wouldn't hurt.
A few minor things...
Page 23, panel 4: "Even though out it's the men's bath time..."
Page 23, panel 5: "Gotta scoop scoot!"
Page 29, panel 5: "Doing to try Trying your best for your students above all else..."
And yeah, resist the page 34 impulse