And God Said - Ch. 2 - Oneshot (Part Two)

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Unless it was intentional, "peace" is spelled wrong on the first page.

Not bad for something user created. Pretty good art, good posing and scene composition, decent characters, and interesting plot. Hopefully the author decides to make more.

Also, I'm confused about the implication of the minister staying behind with one bullet in the chamber?
 
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Interesting concept, especially that the higher ups of the religious institutions are not exactly in line with gods intention and ignore gods will, which is a useful explanation for how a good intentioned god and a crap human world can coexist.

While the death of the mother is pretty tropey, it completely fulfills its goal of putting the protagonist on his journey. Bonus points if in possible future chapters the protagonist puts together that gods divine will was directly responsible for the death of his mother.
 

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