APPLE - Oneshot

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The art was really good for sure, but I am not a fan of the writing. The protagonist personality isn't really my cup of tea, and the villain was cartoonishly evil. And the wishing pond just opens a whole can of worms in regards to how it works.
 
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The art was really good for sure, but I am not a fan of the writing. The protagonist personality isn't really my cup of tea, and the villain was cartoonishly evil. And the wishing pond just opens a whole can of worms in regards to how it works.
i mean it was a short story but it did seem like the villain had some kind of extreme delusion
 
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I was expecting apple to just die after killing the real president because that was his existence's requirement or something. This was a cool little oneshot.
 
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Every male naked body I have seen has been against my will, but 10/10 peak cinema
 

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