Aroma-chan wa Konya mo Hazukashii - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[MangaDex]

 

[Treswimming]

Ooh, looks interesting

 

[TheFiller]

Nice one ... and i dont think that your english is Bad i Could understand all bubbles

 

[Yvonso]

Definitely could understand your translations, but could use some proofreading pretty strongly too. Thanks for the translations though, really enjoyed the manga!

 

[Tcof]

the face design and reaction is is a bit boring but fun read.
also

if only it were real

its not in a moment already gone. Just a what if. So i guess is is fine right. Not English native myself, could be wrong

 

[Woodsman]

Good effort on translating, it's more than readable. Nothing seems too out of place judging from the english sentences alone

 

[KiTA]

This is cute, good effort!

 

[mommunism]

@Tcof You're right. "Were" is used to talk about a hypothetical (fake) past, but "was" would be used if something actually happened before.

 

[whosaint]

Ah... Hmm Hmm
thanks for your feedback and opinions (*^▽^*)

 

[WanDown]

Nice job my friend, hope u keep improving. I'm also trying to learn english.
Thanks for uncover this gem for us, i hope someone pick it up.

 

[OnlyReadsRomance]

Good stuff. Also keep inproving your english, you are on the right way

 

[RafGL]

Thank you for bringing this! Keep going on, your english seems to be improving a lot, and it was mostly readable!

 

[greatninja3]

I wish someone falls in love with me by just talking to a girl once

 

[zetsubouzanto]

@WhoSainT my criticism : you have done great job dude , it's a waste to not continue this holy mission . you start it might as well as complete it .

 

[miner49er]

I NEED more of this , asap.
happy to offer my proof reading services.

 

[JKLnHYD]

This wasn't bad at all. People have posted way worse translations. There were some grammar mistakes, but you could understand everything.

 

[Biggie]

There are mistakes, but everything is a 100% understandable, keep up the good work.

 

[whosaint]

Aye... thanks for the moral supports.

 

[Yourself]

A lewd fluffy succubus. Nice.

 

[Honshou]

nice one

hatur nuhun