Aroma-chan wa Konya mo Hazukashii - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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Another Pure Succ love story, this is almost as good as Gyaru love stories
 

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Crap MMC, girl falls in love with boy because muh kindness, "I don't stand out" she says as a cute JK with a huge rack...

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Pretty decent translation, a bit stiff but very good for a first try, and you nailed it with fonts and typesetting, you should keep doing it.
 
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Besides a couple of times you missed a word in a short sentence (where it's more easily noticed) I didn't notice the translation at all which is basically what you should aspire to. 😄
 

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