I also think this was a pretty good tl. Idk how it compares to the original, but it was readable and made sense. More than can be said about some other tls I've seen.
Thanks for the effort and sharing your work.
Would've liked some warning about the tentacle ecchi spread throughout. Regardless, a short and cute read that I enjoyed until the end, without a good confession scene. Without the ecchi, the story is weak. 6/10
I wanted more in the confession scene, they upgrad the relation from friends at .... best friends forever =/ this need 14 volumenes but maybes isnt popular and only 4